All Comments on 'It's Only Being Photographed Pt. 02'

This shows how you can build a story and have an effect on the reader!

Excellent, thank you!

Extremely erotic. Love the slow build-up. Looking forward to another chapter.

I absolutely loved this story! I certainly hope there will be another chapter (or two or three) in this story, and I look forward to reading everything else you choose to share with us. I do love the slow build, the reluctance, the naturalness of your style. I thank you for sharing your amazing talent for storytelling!

looking forward to part 3

Them spending the night together making love.

Then including the men photo sessions group shots 4 way.

Incest. Happy writing and thanks

Both Pts. - 01 & 02 of this story are well written and the "Lesbian Seduction Play" by Sophie is just awesome. I am eagerly anticipating several more Pts of "It's Only Being Photographed", primarily because of the Author's unhurried pace into the actual sex.

I continue expecting Sophie to ravish Jay in the next paragraph, which does not happen, therefore constantly accelerating the excitement level of this story.

Anxiously waiting for Pt. 03, with Pts 01 / 02 currently being 5*Star Ratings In Every Aspect Of Sensuous!!!!

really hot. keep it going

Absolutely lovely!

Beautifully written. :)

I loved it and want to read more!

Got so hot in here it nearly burned my home down but oh what a way to go!

you have built up the tension and the sexual frustration in both ofbthem lets here about their next step.

more please

This story MUST continue!

Such Sensuality

Now, that's a story that drew me in gradually and easily - rising ever higher with the emotions of Jay/Jayne. Nothing was ever taken for granted and I adored the lack of certainty that plagued the unsuspecting sitter. There is an intensity of sensual emotion - reluctance and acceptance - that is magnified the deeper into the tale that you travel, and the two parts perfectly and beautifully represent a complete story. Not that I would object to more....

I’ve loved reading Chapters 1&2 and hope there will be more in future to develop the scene and relationship between the two women. The slow descriptive buildup is very erotic and seeing how Jayne is being drawn out of her hidden persona and revealing her desire to show off her body and sexuality to the other woman is highly erotic and arousing. How long Will I have to wait for Ch3?!!

Wiz1002

I read both parts guessing and expecting what was to happen from the outset, what I didn't allow for was the delicious frustration waiting to read about Sophie completing her seduction of Jayne.

From the first mention of posing for photos the build up was relentless and wonderfully written. I expected them to fall into each others arms at any time, after every sentence, but you kept me on edge, eager and hungry for the moment, and still I wait.

Unless the author has some serious twist planned the next part is pretty obvious, and nothing wrong with that, the question is; how will it end? Hopefully, in my humble opinion, not including the men or incest.

A quite beautiful and erotic tale. Thanks.

I love what Mangazer said. The only difference is that I am both complete now and open to more...

I have to agree with all of the comments made Pt. 03 is definitely needed. I admit I thought that after being seduced Jayne would also be introduced to the joy and beauty of sapphic love

dastardly.dick@rocketmail.com

Oh, please continue this story!

I'm with everyone else desiring more of this delicious tale.

...and even more tantalizing than Part 01! More of your wonderful writing please!

Love

Marixxx

Another masterpiece awaiting chapter 3. The way you draw out the emotional struggle is superb. Your narrative put me in the room with the two of you.

while it kept me reading till end, found Sophie's insistence creepy

and the end, her son's gf naked on the bed rubbing one out with Jay...really...?

still, gave it a 4-kept me engrossed to see how it turned out

I have loved the slow build up between the apparently shy older lady and the confident, persuasive younger girl that has lead to both being naked on Jayne’s bed and both had an almost hands free orgasm. I look forward to reading about them both fulfilling their lesbian desires and succumbing to the full sex that will inevitably occur.

I’ve just seen Ch3 has been posted so will now pop over their with great expectation and see what develops!!!

...an author who I can read without wincing. I like the slow build and the denial/submission. I've had a photography story hiding in the back of my mind for some time and although my scenario is different I love the back story here.

Would love to collaborate on a story some time. :)

Hugs, Anna x

Oh Jayne,

I can't stop reading this series.

Incredibly erotic and totally brilliant descriptive writing.

Loving it!!!

The more of your stories I read the more I want. Another 5

WOW! So hot and erotic

I love this story, only the cheating of Jay vs her husband and Sophie vs Peter bothers me a lot. I hate cheating. Maybe we arent there yet, but I'm sure we will get there next part.

The sexual tension in this story is brilliant. Another 5stars

This story is just excellent, keeps bukding and building