All Comments on 'It's the Same Old Story'

Another anonymous comment/Tom stole my wife story. Why do you keep doing it? Put your name on the stories and post them as they are fictional stories.

Stupid story, factually so wrong. She deserved to be crucified but make it realistic please.

I think this was a parody, it should have been in humor. Loved the ending. *****

Understand this, women. The moment you spread your legs and willingly allow a man other than your husband put his mouth, fingers, or penis inside your mouth, pussy or ass, you can no longer truthfully tell your husband, "I still love you." And another lie is when a woman says, "What I had with them was just sex. It wasn't love." Wrong again. One of the major components of sex is love. And if you love your husband, you are willing to have sex with him. Otherwise, you are not a wife.In marriage love and sex are synonymous. Great story. Liked the ending.

The comment about him learning first aid while a Navy SEAL is absolutely useless! If he had been a Navy SEAL, he would've recovered in time to have taken out the two bastards despite the injuries to his extremities! Making him a Navy SEAL makes this implausible story far less plausible! In the LW category there are hundreds, if not thousands of stories with former Navy SEALs, Delta Forces, Army Rangers, USMC Recon,or USAF Para Rescue. Every guy seeking revenge is one of these guys here in Literotica. There has been a grand total of only 35 million people who served in the entire US Armed Forces since 1775, ( about 16 million during World War II--and those guys still alive are all in their 90's now, so they aren't that likely to be still faster than a locomotive, or leaping tall buildings in a single bound); but you authors still have that number of 35 million exceeded by the number of Special Forces used by the authors here!

I give one star to all authors for such gratuitous use of these gallant G.I.s!

In the story especially, the use of this is completely worthless! Does he do anything else with his SEAL training? If you had had him do something special by virtue of his military training, (e.g., break into the car trunk and get inside without being discovered while under Law Enforcement's eyes); then the gratuitous use of his status as a former SEAL would perhaps be a little bit less offensive.

What would've made a good deal more sense if you were going to explain how he could handle his injuries due to some special training in first aid, would be to have stated he was able to remember many years ago what he learned as a Boy Scout. Otherwise, just say he found some gauze rolls in the other bathroom, removed his blood stains carefully, and bandaged himself. It doesn't take a rocket scientist to stop the bleeding!

The best friend must have known that he was an ex Seal yet he lied to the wife in order to fuck her and at the same time had the highly dangerous killing machine tied up in the next room.

Unbelievable bs and juvenile in the extreme.

1*

The part about the seal was explained at the end.

Over used themes! Did you not read the last few lines.

Putting gauze on is pretty complex

This is a got damn story that was made up! Believe it or not nearly all members of the Armed forces are given training in first aid. Even dumb asses like you should know the gause was for the bleeding. But no dumb anonymous people are too smart they are so smart they can't find their own asses. So no wonder they can't help a struggling writer correct a problem with a story. Writer the wife in this story was too Buick to not believe her husband even with your explanation and Beverly stayed married to a guy who had sex like a hell I don't know no oral for the wife. No kissing the wife after she performed oral on him. I'm not sure what to call someone like that.

If they hadn't been so quick to jump the gun there would be no story.

How long had they been married? Did they have children during their marriage?

Why didn't he go to a hospital if his ankle was hurt so bad he could work. How did she know he was coming home at that time.

Why didn't he see the strange car in the driveway?

Keep writing I appreciate your work!

I could not remember the ending but enjoyed it again

Revenge is sweet. I can read a story like this over and over. I thought what he did was fantastic and new to me. Thank you so much for your story.

George's an x-USN SEAL and he allowed another to so easily get the drop on him, then with just a semi-choke hold and the SEAL just let him do it - BSSSSSS.

Mike better watch his back as any SEAL I know would eventually get 'real' revenge much more than 1yr easy-time or marry Mike's x-wife, remember Mike created this whole mess.

But a bigger issue I have is, SEALs are very smart super trained disciplined guys (not knuckle draggers), that George would marry such a dip-shit bimbo is also beyond BS? And the Bimbo didn't comprehend George's USN-SEAL background and be part of this type of torture???

This is just another L-Fantasy that has no aire of reality.

It amazes me how many readers of this story completely missed the point of the story. Perhaps if they had read the short author's note at the end of the story they might have understood. But then again maybe not.

Maybe there is something to overused themes because this one was a fun read.

There is no way he was a seal and i should know because I am a retired seal.If that was me they all would be dead and Tyrone never would have gotten close enough to touch me much less get me in a choke hold and drug me and even if they did when i got loose i would have destroyed them just thought the readers should know

Cuck shit.

1*

I thought of the Navy Seal thing as a sarcastic shot at his abilities...

You certainly hit a lot of the shopworn plot themes in this one -- pretty much out of the park!

The Anon morons wouldn't know satire if it ran up to them growling and bit them in the ass!

Some of your tales are a little dark for me, but I keep reading your stuff to uncover little gems like this one.

I'd also give "Gift Cards" 5 stars if I could. Flo setting up Jason to get fired was the icing on the cake! Or was the icing that hubby got to watch and then eat out Flo's hot creampie when they got home?

Thanks for a great send-up (or two)!

No, really, this is a story?

SATIRE!!! And still some people didn't get it. Is "extensive seal training" learning to clap bacwards and say arf arf? ;)

It never works, and it's never good. No wife is ever as stupid as the wives in these stories, and it's impossible to get anything out of the story if the wife isn't believable. This has been written so many times already, and it's always the same. Some cad (in this case the fake best friend) lies to the wife about the husband cheating, the wife is always too stupid to breathe and believes the creep without any proof, and doesn't talk to the husband before hand,and then the husband, instead of confronting the wife, and trying to fix things, and instead of being a man, he turns into a complete asshole. If that is what you think men and women are about, then I have to wonder what planet you are from.

I wonder how many people don't read the comment at the end? Quite a few, judging by how many complain that the storyline wasn't original. Until I read the explanation I thought it was just a quick one following the usual theme, including the old navy seal schtick. Afterwards I appreciated the intent. Of COURSE the wife was an idiot- that's what people usually make them in these types of stories. Since we never got to know her, I don't feel for her troubles like I normally would. Just a fun story to read.

I guess I had overlooked this one. Decent, but not your best.

The comments of that MaFrepler are the funnest!! ..." And then the husband, instead of confronting the wife, and trying to fix things" ...is he insane?? A wife who drugs him handcuffs him and let him watch her betrayel and for that slut he will fix things??!! He has real to be insane!! MAybe he needs mental help!!!

What happen to Mike when he got out of jail after nine months. Did he walk on?

Had you done that, the comments would have been more favorable.

Or place it in "Humor & Satire" and an opening note stating readers would have to read carefully to find the jokes and then your note at the end.

to the material inside. Many people seem to have lost the ability to think at all. They have to be told everything before they can jump to the wrong conclusion.

Navy Seal...

a five year old could write a better story.....pathetic

From the over the top revenge screen to the passing reference to being a Navy SEAL, the revenge sex with the other wronged spouse and even the element of blackmail.

All the standard LW elements with tongue firmly in cheek. It was a great read. Thanks.

Though I loved the husbands scheme. Would make a great realistic story without the other traditional elements used in this parody.

Good job.

Good story. Thanks

Those last two words he spoke to her, were the icing on the cake. I myself used 3, die and rot...........5* easy........ROBT

1 could have been " Eat shit and die' cums to mind, TK U MLJ LV NV

No Wimps! Right On K.K.

I keep coming back to re-read this story. I like it for a lot of reasons. I found the right touch of humor; but mainly I find it entertaining each time I read it. I don't read a story to find flaws. I read to be entertained. And you get 5 stars for that. Although I am ex-military, I find no fault in that element of your story. I am not a banker, a policeman nor a lawyer, and I could care less about nitpicky, meaningless flaws in these areas. No matter how great a story you write, you will find people who will criticize. Let me ask you this, writer, are YOU happy with it? There's your answer!

You raced to end the story..where you could of added more and had a much better ending.

How stupid can a woman be?! Mustn't have been much of a marriage if the twat was just willing to take the friend's word for her husband's alleged cheating and then go for such nasty revenge.She didn't stop to think that just maybe Mike was just looking to fuck her? Wouldn't a wife who loved her husband want to confront him before destroying any chance for a reconciliation? ~ Only way this way-out-there story works is if it's considered as tongue-in-cheek. The whole revenge sex episode is over-the-top and then we move to the stereotypical BBC Tyrone actually being a drug-dealer and gun-runner,the blood-splattered guest room,the only thing missing was a longer, more disgustingly descriptive of the double-fuck/suck scene. ~ Another missing element would have to be getting revenge on his former best friend Mike!One year in a minimum security prison,for what he did?Get real! And the twat only gets probation? Not nearly enough! ~ At least,in the end,the bitch was burned.

Good story. BTB and took her lovers with her. Excellent results.

Chur bro awesome story

Has Timriv blamed everything on the husband yet?

Satisfyingly vicious!! Well played!

5 stars!

Do I blame the husband? No,

but did not think the story was really realistic. To think all he had to do is go to Beverly and say let’s have sex and she would is not realistic even for a story like this. Think he should have talked to his wife at the beginning after he had her served. It would have saved a lot of time. The wife was stupid, gullible and vengeful. So divorcing her was not a problem for me. Could he forgive and take her back eventually, who knows, maybe in time once the hurt feelings, pride and ego are put behind him, but his marrying Beverly on the rebound would likely end in another divorce once they realize they only have hurt feelings in common. Like K.K.’s stories but think this one is lacking. 3+*

what is BTB?

I suppose there must be, but what an idiot! Run, do not walk, to the nearest divorce lawyer. Do not pass sorry. Do not receive 200 apologies.

Good story!

this stupid anywhere but it makes for a fun story.

Spiteful women. Ya...dumb too. 5

...he didn't take her back. For a second I thought he might. Would have been interesting to know how tammy ended up. Good story, good writing. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

To read this great bloodless BTB. He got.loose.and took everybody out. Wives in these stories always take things too far. It was good to see one pay. Nice to see Mike and Tyrone pay too.

so he got what he married: stupid, selfish, and absolutely no morals or ethics. He got what deserved for marrying such an incredibly stupid woman.

The comments are part of the satire. The man even says that this story is a shot at packing as many clichés in as possible and the commentariat STILL goes on and on analyzing the plot and basis of the story.

Dopes are part of the joke that they don't get.

It seemed so cliched until I read the author's note at the end. After reading that note I reread the story and laughed my ass off. It was intended that way, and because of that I gave it 5 Stars. Great twist on an old plot. Totally despicable characters in Tammy, Mike, and Tyrone. George just happened to be an ex navy seal? What a hoot!

Everything about the story is a bit ridiculous!

at the end including the comments the readers would make! Very funny. I wondered when he claimed to be an ex-seal, but no story that I've read here deliberately piled the shit so high, so I dismissed that seal thing as an unworthy reference, got me !!

Well done.

2 starrs

He came home at least a day, if not two, early. How were they “ready” for him with drugs (ether?)?

So she would have been fucking away with Mike and Tyrone for at least a day or two before George got home. Well, I suppose if she was being blackmailed (or is that blackmaled in this case), she had little choice.

Ah well, 4-stars

Reading again after seeing your note. I don't think you missed a single LW cheating wife cliche. Not a single one except maybe having the in laws begging him to reconsider. Glad to see that Tyrone, the stunt bbc, with his guns and drugs made an appearance. Reading as satire, it's just too good. My skimming dumb ass completely missed it the first tim.

I thought " Why did he write this ? " Then I read your postlogue. Nice touch!

who the fuck is beverly,

And yeah, K. K., I think you got almost every cliche in the book into this story. There is a book, isn’t there? Has to be, so many writers here use the same old plot lines. But I like the way K.K. just put them all together and made it work. Five (5) stars. brother.

I think that was the point. As soon as I saw the navy SEAL training, I figured that had to be it.

It surely hit the main themes.

I really enjoyed this Story .. I think it is the best I have read of yours ..

But the title was a dead giveaway for me in what was going to happen. Considering there were no kids involved and that we hadn't met her parents you pretty much covered the main cliches, even had the black drug dealer named Tyrone with the big cock. Since Mike recorded the first fuck I expect the gangbang was too. Would seem good and proper (cliche as well) if he had gotten his hands on them and shared them with all. Good job, although I admit I did feel his pain it was a fun read. Signed: BTW

So, what ever happened to the ever so damning video tape of the entire party?

That surely would have been hardcore evidence, so to speak.

If it is the same old story why did I read it? Why not have a twist different like from the other stories. Your writing is good as always. I gave you a 4 since the story did not vary as your others do. Thanks for the effort though I know how difficult it is to please everybody. Again thank you!

A fitting BTB ending. Tammy was stupid cunt to listen to Mike. I hope Tyrone and Mike becomes good friends with Bubba while in prison. Going back to Tammy, as everyone knows she went over the top. I also like George's reply to Tammy of "Drop Dead"

HKL BTB fan and RAAC under appropriate circumstances

It was frustrating to read a few of your stories where you portrayed the husband as a wimp Cuck,allowing his wife to pork other men.At least you let the husband keep his balls in this one. Don’t get me wrong, ,your stories are well-written and constructed but,the accepting Cuck shit just doesn’t fly with me.

1 for this story. The writing style looked like some kind of a police report, with just the facts and nothing but the facts. It was boring, unfeeling and totally unbelievable.

Five Stars for this tale. I've read this before and it was very harsh what the cunt wife did. Some best friend, huh? And he brought a criminal with him. Just a shame she didn't get jail time. She deserved it. But, as they say, all's well that end's well.

And he doesn't knew about drugs and weapons?

And no likeably person in this

5* -- can't go wrong when you stick to the classics eh?

Very good story...I loved reading it...this stupid slut bitch cheating whore deserved everything she got..and a whole lot more...5 stars

I gave the story of 5. Finally you write a story that didn't include a cock sucking come out of was white pussy that some other guy put in there. I can't believe how many of the stories you have in your. I'm gonna continue reading your stories hoping that you'll be more like this one.

She fucks the bastard Mike, the night BEFORE her husband is due. Why?! She is blackmailed by the cocksucker and YET goes ahead with her plans to humiliate her husband AND with her blackmailer?! Is she brain dead, to believe her blackmailer's lies? She surely got what she deserved!

Over the top nonsense. KK is a better writer than this.

LA

All three of them would had been charged with Aggravated assault or Attempted murder as

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As satire this is great.

Did Mike explain how he knew her hubby was cheating when he was out of town?

Maybe his next wife will be a little smarter!

This author is not a good writer. Although this is not one of them, ther is too much cuck shit in the portfolio. This was just bad drivel.

hmmmmp it more on what was itt to be done though hres the end but its not quite the end ot very one you should have expound the result closure of mike and Tammy if what was thier condition after alll you end upt maryying beverly anyway its a nice story about revenge for good

This was a very well-crafted pastiche! It still made me chuckle even after multiple readings. Thank you for sharing it. Oh, and happy 2022! :-)

Particular Reader

Stupid story. Charges doesn't fit the crime.

Not your best work

Seems Tammy's IQ is about equal to her age. How anyone could be married to her without realizing she wasn't playing with a full deck I don't know but the story is a fun romp through the BTB category.

Liked the story, it's a laugh, thanks for writing it .....

Amazing that this story you thought of as a pastiche is the best story I've read from you. All of your other statements are cheap cuckold farces!

yeah, that's a woman alright. lol

Could have done without the word 'show' 7 times in the first paragraph.

This was so preposterous that suspending disbelief is impossible. Your skill as a writer cannot be denied but this is pure garbage. Perhaps if there was more depth to Tammy which explains her actions. I can't even call this a slut ray story. It's more psychosis ray.

Look, if I caught my husband cheating I would kick his ass, literally. He knows this because he knows me, my past, what I have been through, how I react to contentious situations, betrayal and treachery. There would be no confusion over my reaction.

Waste of my time.

K.K., You seem to stir up the worst in bad named readers. What was the last one?, oh yeah, Sexexecutioner, What you left for the reader was simple; Tammy has had the hots for Mike for years, and apparently, he for her, so the minute she hears a story, without proof from the guy she has had all kinds of fantastys about, she sees her opening, and Mike gets what he wants, probably without even asking. Am I the only one that saw that? I thought adding Tyrone in to the mix was clever, it's just to bad George did not get a shot at him, physically. If you write a sequel , have George waiting at the prison exit, for Mike and later Tyrone, with the police dept. later finding unidentified body parts spread over a junk yard. Did your outstanding, readers forget he was a retired Seal? You do not fuck with them. To K.K. As usually, Well done. Though much shorter than the last one of yours I read. Good job. Keep writing.

XYZ

You describe the events well and describe the characters well too. The issue I have is the implausibility of the plot. The wife is happy to have sex with a guy on tape she's being blackmailed to screw so that she can force her husband to watch it with the aim of reconciling with him after.

The old ‘my extensive experience as a NAVY SEAL’ trick. That fucked it for a start, much less the rest of the ridiculous bullshit served up as a story.

Tammy's head dropped down on top of the table and she began crying. I could still hear her crying as I walked out the door.

Three months later Beverly and I got married.

The end. rofl wtf was that who the hell is beverly lol wow an ending that leaves more questions is not an ending

To answer the last guy's question, Beverly is Mikes wife!

The following comment is not about you as as a person. It's about your writing.

You do have a talent for writing a story but seem completely oblivious to the utter nonsense you sprinkle through it.

There are very good writers in the LW area, VERY GOOD, and none would so foolishly, apparently on purpose, such non-sequter trip as you offered here.

I've read 3 of your stories, a fair try I think, but your work, NOT you personally, is not worth more of my time to read.

Please get a proof reader to help build realistic plot coherence to at least permit the reader to suspend disbelief.

It just a funny story that hits all the major points that deal with a cheating partner.

The reading comprehension of some of the commenters is abysmal. K.K. Stated that he deliberately added all the crap cliches he possibly could in the story. Early home, best friend, big dick black man, navy seal experience, screwed and married the other wife. !!!! Buck up for fucks sake and pay attention before you post crap.

Drugged, forced cuckolding, Martian slut ray, over the top revenge, woman scorned, btb, wife seduced by best friends husband, forced to watch, giant black dick, black drug dealer, revenge, married said best friends wife happily ever after.

This was the worst kind of awful and AngelRider nailed it perfectly by listing all of the truly worn out cliches in this preposterous tale. The only one the author didn't find a place for was the parents killed in a car crash. It's beyond my understanding why a writer would apparently contrive to come up with something as bad as this.