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"I honestly don't know. I think my gaydar needs fine-tuning."
"So, when's the next meeting?" Sam asked.
"Thursday, but at the rate he's working I don't think we're going to have many more meetings before this is done," I said, voicing my fears from this afternoon.
"Oh, don't worry my young padawan, the ways of the Jedi, soon enough you'll learn," Sam said in a solemn voice, mimicking what I could only assume was a lame attempt at Yoda. "Oh, this is so exciting, I feel like I'm playing cupid," she said, breaking character.
"Cupid? What did you do? I'm talking to Evan all on my own," I said, which earned me a slap on the arm.
"Oh, and I totally didn't help you text the guy first," she scowled.
"She's got you there, bro," Brian said. Next thing we knew, the pizza had arrived and my meeting was all but forgotten, everyone's attention now on the flat triangles of heavenly wonder in front of us.
A good meeting and pizza. I say that was a pretty good day, wouldn't you?
- COMMENTS
Hutchison12over 6 years agoLove the way you put the story together, it suspends reality enough so you can in your minds eye, see, feel, the conversations going on around you, like your a silent member of the group just watching, love it, nenvr change they way you write, thanks again. AAAAA+
Anonymousabout 7 years agoDon't change anything! I really love your writing style and the back n forth dialogue. Catching up on chapters today after having been gone for work. I think you've done a great job with character development and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
musicfreakabout 7 years agoAuthorMaybe there is a lot of dialog but that's just how I write. Personally, I like stories with a good back and forth between characters, especially so when it involves a bigger group of characters because I always felt it was weird if only two people were talking in a group of 5 for example. I guess it just boils down to personal preference. Not everyone will like my style of writing and that's okay.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThe dialogue is very believable. There's so much of it though. I found myself skipping a lot of it in this chapter to get to what actually happens. Not sex, just action.
Belle2327about 7 years agoI love the way you have written everything. Honestly can't wait to read all chapters when's they become available. Well done! 10/5 from me :)
