by Voboy
It's the fall semester, he's a star football player, but he has Friday evenings after school open? Uh, no. They have games, every Friday night, all fall.
That whole thing with her sister, where she just couldn't quite figure out what was painfully obvious, mostly because the dialogue was stilted and contrived. Weaksauce. kudos for hating on cat people though, they're all fucking crazy.
I enjoyed all the words….Because it’s a story. A story without words is a comic book. The methodical build-up is what gives the story a non-comic book feel. Friday nights in the fall ARE football nights for high school; then again, this is a town where teachers and students relentless fuck each other, so I’ll forgive the disrespect shown to that most sacred time of Friday evening in favor of the…fucking. I know I’m supposed to acquiesce to society’s demand for revulsion at the all the fucking between teacher and student, but I can’t help but root for the loving couple. While I agree that the dialogue is not the strongest part of the story, I recognize the effort at, like, making a high school student, like, sound like a high school student (and for what it’s worth, if a high school teacher had called me ‘honey’, I’d have spilled semen in my lap, too.) Besides, how many other authors can make a “frothy” vagina sound so hot? The answer is not that many. As happens with each new story, the author has re-established (themselves) as a favorite.
The last page was hot. The rest was so long that I literally fell asleep reading it.
Absurd. A teacher will risk a career like that so blithely? Also, what 30ish woman talks/acts like a blue collar guy in his 20s?
She starts off bitching and whining on her way to school, cheats on her boyfriend, and openly flirts and fools around at school.
As the previous commentator wrote--absurd.
This is one of my favorite stories on this site. The comments do not do it justice. It's a bit silly, as her being kinda a base skank that cheat on her bf for a hunk with a big hog is not also a nurturer. But she also looks out for this guy. It's ironic, weird, but also hot.
Also there is a bust for this like every year. Often times they don't wait til 18.
Absolutely fantastic. Emotional and sexual and satisfying. Fantastic work. Thank you.