All Comments on 'I've Always Craved You'

A nice read! That's many a married man's dream and nightmare simultaneously, Suzuki. Weil written, as I'd expect from you with your language skills and your sense for details. Still, I think your other stories are better, much better, both in terms craft and plot. Did you intend to make this the first of a series? You are asking for honest opinions, aren't you?

@Nokk, Thank you! Well, actually, I had a bit of a word count limit on this for various reasons, so I wasn't able to expand it as much as I would normally, but hopefully that didn't hurt it too badly.