All Comments on 'Ivory's First Massage'

I loved every line

Great first story. I hope you keep writing. I want to know what Ivory's next adventures are.

Great effort! Where to from here? Please feal encouraged to keep writing.

Very descriptive ...

But she didn't get her tight butt hole stretched out. He needed to finish the trifecta!

I enjoyed reading about Ethan's massage of Ivory.

Yep, it was erotic and well described of their fuck

Looking forward to Jasmine H next story soon

Would score this a 4*

Really liked the way the story builds. The only negative is that I felt it got to dragging on a bit at the end.

Just like Ivory's first massage, your first story exceeded all expectations. Keep on writing!

Love, oh my god. Fantastic writing you made me so wet. Please continue this.