All Comments on 'Jacey's Reluctant Awakening Ch. 07'

great to see you writing again love it,please say thiers more.

Hope to read more

Welcome back! I think she needs to go visit the other cheerleaders again next... ;)

I'm happy to see you back. Again, it's a beautiful story, a wonderful addition. The characters are not entirely driven by their bodies and lust. Scott, especially, is not the usual perv brother you can read about in most literotica stories, nor Jacey the usual innocent victim and this is a very good change.

The only problem with this chapter is, again, that it is too short for my taste. Then again if you keep on delivering this level of quality, I don't mind.

Sorry, have been absolutely swamped with 12 hour day work. Will try to keep stories coming quicker. The hardest part is trying to image ways to transition between episodes. Some future chapters are partially written, but their posting now would be way out of order. Trying to keep stories long enough to be episodes and short enough to be posted frequently.

.....to have John hook up with Jacey or Kerry or several of the girls at another "team building" sleep-over or something?

Great story. Please continue. Excellent character development.

Nice expansion to the original situation in a smooth progressive way. Still hope that Jacey ends up as a lesbian, and before that Scott gets to fuck her.

This series is so hot. I'm not sure where you've been for the last decade @Aspire2Provide, but I really hope you return to writing someday. You have a true gift!