All Comments on 'Jack'

i loved the story .. just disapointed at the ending ... it just stopped....

no, they will do this again.... why they should... or shouldn't....

other wise great.

The story was ok, but the grammar and spelling errors really took away from it. Made it very difficult to keep moving through it.

that was the best story i've read in a long time... good job... and keep writing ....wow great job once again u put alot of details i just wish u didnt end it that way but other than that great!

I read "rapped" and wondered why the story was starting off with a character hitting another. I couldn't read past that.