All Comments on 'Jack'

You should continue this story. I really loved and want to see more submission from all sides!

What a fantastic story. I so hope this will continue with more abuse and humiliation.

Really enjoyed it. You have a very vivid and enticing imagination.

You did a wonderful job of weaving both her, and his, emotions, feelings into this story.

I loved how she enjyed herself, and even while caning him she was interested in his pleasure... not too much, but that he had some... while she enjoyed herself...

Nicely done... very real from my experience.

Your story is excellent, the denial, humiliation, the initial discovery, all wonderful. I would love to read what happens next in their relationship.

This is very wel written, highly erotic!

Great job!

Good wriitng. Erotic and well thought out.. hope there will be more

Excellent writing, characterization, and pacing. You added those little touches that turn fairly elementary (if you'll forgive the term) BDSM practices into one hot play session. Congratulations, and more, please!

This was amazing. You really captured the essence and excitement of both the. Domme and the sub. I found myself stroking my own cock while reading this story but resisting the urge to climax because you had denied it for Jack. Then the irony of making him stroke to climax while you whipped him was exquisite. Thank you for sharing your talent.

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Deliciously kinky!!