by zeropatience
This is a great re-imagining of the J and J storyline. Loved this one! Jack seems a mature, strapping young man -- in love with Jill as she is with him. He appears shirtless -- sweaty sides the hay wagon. How about a mature young man with some chest hair for that "manly best," even some dusting for his treasure trail. He has a magnificent cock to keep Jill entertained! Keep these two together, please! Please continue your interesting story! More details and descriptions, please!