by MeatBeat117
The concept has "legs".
If it's easy to cross between worlds, you COULD bring the sexy version of Lyla into contact with the "normal" version.
Imagine her watching a guy have sex with her alternate universe self...
Dude please keep going, this has enornous potential and lots of incredible scenarios. I'm eagerly waiting!
You’ve got potential. I like how the story gets into the sex pretty quickly, but what do your characters look like?