All Comments on 'Jack and the Rollercoaster Ch. 04'

The dialogue is very insinuating and it is interesting to see him trying to maintain his distance. The question, of course,

is about her motivation.

is the same as his. But his experiences with women has caused a shadow to pass over what he thinks a woman holds as important.

he finds a way to reconnect with his daughter in the near future.

it's a pity more readers have not found it.