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All Comments on 'Jack Be Quick Ch. 01'

by HansTrimble

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bruce22bruce22over 9 years ago
Beautifully executed

Having been in science and universities for sixty years, I feel at home in this story.

mcollectmcollectover 9 years ago
This is the way to write a story

Perfect timing, great character development' I can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Agree

This is good advice in a well written story.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 9 years ago
Bearslady said it

Exactly my sentiment. I'm intrigued...

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

I'm intrigued with where this story is going. It's well written and just enough detail to keep the reader curious. Look forward to the next chapter.

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I'm an engineer, widowed, retired from the aircraft industry and loving every minute of my retirement! It's great being able to do what I want, when I want, the way I want. I've found it very relaxing to sit at the keyboard at night, when everything is quiet, and write wha...

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