All Comments on 'Jack Meets Wendy'

Interesting work! An entertaining tale. I liked the accidental aspect of the Jack & Wendy encounter which just happened to pinpoint Todd's history. Nice.

-- KVK

A great short love story with an erotic shiver. Honest and provocative.

Don't bother listening to what the first schmuck said. Wonderfully done. Keep 'em coming.

I love stories with a good/happy ending

Too many stories in Lit are little more than boring masturbatory fantasies. This bit of writing was done by an author who knows about plot development and character growth. The sex reads like a natural part of the story. Frankly, this is the first "5" rating I've given in well over a year. Please write more.

I enjoyed it I'd like to be Wendy

Very nicely structured and interesting.

Thanks again Dinsmore, The more of your stories I read. the more I like them. I think that like me you are an incurable romantic. keep them coming, a pleasure to read them

I have not been disappointed with one of your stories yet,

A pretty nice story, I suppose, but I didn't get a "feel" for the characters.

He seemd to make a sport out of fucking the married wifes of the neighbourhood but at least he was unmarried himself, - she was a cheating housewife from the get-go - hell, she started after only 6 months of marriage - is there any reason to believe she would change her behavior? - Not that I could see.

As for the romance part. I did not find much romance in the story - fucking, yes, romance no.

Not one of your best, Dinsmore.

What a variety! Many different plots, usually very good character development. I was glad to see you've written at least a couple of stories in 2010 ... I was afraid you'd "retired" or run out of inspiration. Keep up the good work. [Gualterio]

Tidewater Virginia as a backdrop is pretty cool. You paint Ocean View much better than it really is but that shows your talent (LOL) and some Frank Lloyd Wright was a great throw in plus the ritzy north end Va Beach where damn yankee/canuck tourists just cruise through. Nice writing.

Neither has the greatest moral character -

But they do seem to match well and may actually be honest with the right person - and maybe they are each others right person after all.

Guy who seems ok with fucking other men's wives, meets a newlywed at the meat counter. Invites her over, sets his "seduction" scene and has lube less anal on the beach after the obligatory oral session.

He just happens to know her polygamist husband, and is very judgemental of the fact that this guy marries more than one woman at a time, even though this increases the number of the kind of women he prefers to fuck.

They fall in love, have lots of babies and live happily ever af.....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz