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All Comments on 'Jack O' Lantern - A Halloween Story'

by The_Technician

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Intriguing & pithy

Not many have the talent for a compelling short detective story but you obviously do. I am delighted to have read this tale and I look forward to reading your other works. Good luck in the contest. I can easily see you as a novel or novella writer. I am trying my best not to come across as a sycophant but I appear to be failing miserably. Cheers and thanks again.

flowerGRL94flowerGRL94over 4 years ago

The story had a Halloween vibe to it that enjoyed. The discussion of the detective with the librarian did not fit the rest of the story and it was useless. Some explanations appear rushed and don't appear naturally, they come across as exposition.

SatyrDickSatyrDick7 months ago

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Top Notch!

11/10!!!!!

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...