All Comments on 'Jack O' Lanterns'

Please write more - Faster :)

Enjoyed the read! Nice to see a story with good things happening to good people.

Thanks for sharing!!

I really liked this. Love a hot chubby as much as a SI swimsuit model!

But “at least a 36DD, possibly even a 36E” is the same as saying “an A-flat, possibly even a G-sharp”. In both cases, it’s the same thing.

I do have to point out that Harold lapsed into the "no use of articles" type of speech on page four, while Deidre was prone to it earlier.

I enjoyed this story more than Kiss Me, Charlene.

Keep at it, JB.

Excellent story, loved it. A editor will help.

Thanks for another top of the line story.

Great story and loved the ending

Your description of Deidre reminded me of a girl I dated some 50 years ago after breaking up with my cheating fiancee. Unfortunately, I wasn't as smart as Harold. Her name was Mary and was quite pretty, but with a body just like Deidre, and even though we had a great time together on dates, I was shallow and thought more about what my buddies would think of me dating a "chubby" girl. OMG, she had an unbelievable libido and absolutely drenched her panties while making out, and soaked the sheets during sex! Sadly, I got back together with the cheater and ended up in a dead end marriage of only 3 1/2 years. Guys, if you meet a girl like Deidre, don't screw it up!

One for the good "guys" out there!!!!!

While JimBob44's Louisianan dialog hurts my brain to read, he still manages to entertain in his own laid back style I give him bonus points for bringing us an anti-Barbie big girl who is still sexy in her own way.

It was a good story enjoyed it though it was short. Had a large amount of spelling and grammatical errors and parts that really wernt written well but great story.

Absolutely loved this story. I was that fat girl with thick glasses. I had similar things happen to me in high school. Had to have a friend from out of town take me (for a price),😉😉 still, I managed to find my Prince Charming too. Hugs and keep on writing!!

Entertainment value - high!

Managed sexy and quirky, well done.

Knew right away reading this that it was the same author as “tuff as nails”. Loved it.

bravo! great story! i really enjoyed this. way better than the

' i was a rich midget Greek guy when i fell out of a tree with my 11 inch love muscle and went balls deep into a 13 y/o 6 foot two horny virgin bald-headed orphan and her blind 52H-titted mother was watching now i'm fucking both of them and their 84-year-old newly-married gay neighbor and her 2-inch peckered circuit court judge father licks all 4 of us afterwards whilst wearing a bra, a diaper and ice skates'

crap that a lot of 'writers' post,

Another great story.

Excellent