All Comments on 'Jackie Barnes Ch. 01'

you havent posted the next chapter yet!!!!!!!!!!! what is taking so long?its been like an hour already.

I really enjoyed your writing, I can relate to the references to Lady Luck. The story is very interesting and entertaining.

Being Australian, it was good to read a story in English.

Please continue.

Thankyou

Love love love it! Wonderful story and amazing ending. Can't wait for more!!

This was fucking great. Please continue.

Lovely!