All Comments on 'Jackie's Mom'

by LexxRuthless

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good

Good old fashion butt fucking fun. Perfect for “hump day” reading.

I would’ve appreciated more details about what Jackie’s mom looked like.

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 5 years ago
Wonderful

Another well written story with good description of the sexual encounters, Most guys love anal...too bad Jackie's hubby didn't...they might still be married. She would be a hot wife and not a MILF. 5 Stars.

LeezyLeezyover 5 years ago
Good story.

Just an aside - no Navy person calls the destroyer they are serving on a "boat". The only commissioned vessel in the US Navy that is properly called a boat is a submarine.

A Navy vet.

maxx308maxx308over 5 years ago
Fantastic

Great story, many thanks for sharing.

HardBenHardBenover 5 years ago
AWESOME

Great story. Love the build up and the CLIMAX....ha ha!!! Can just imagine that ass!!!

HamsterHamsterover 5 years ago
Dates and History

This story must have taken place at least 30 years ago because the last of the WWll destroyers (tin cans) were decommissioned by then. Certainly no WWll ships were left when the US got involved in the Persian Gulf. That said, not too bad a story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Boats

I read the earlier comment from the Navy vet, and while it is true technically that boats are tinier vessels sometimes carried aboard ships, I served during the Vietnam conflict aboard the aircraft carrier Midway, and the vast majority of my shipmates referred to her as " the boat." Nuff sed

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story!

It was fun to read the story. Looking forward to upcoming sequel :)

tmark0099tmark0099over 5 years ago
Sequal demand!

Need more Jackie's mom and throw Cynthia or Jackie in the mix as well

Jjdoesit1Jjdoesit1over 5 years ago
Great story

Great build up and characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great job! No time wasted, and good flow to the story!

Well written, and flowed nicely. Not too much wasted time giving meaningless details of unimportant parts. Now I want a "Jackie's Mom!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Part 2?

That was great, you are going to have to have a part 2 or even 3. Got to take this to the next level.

Great read.

JS_PhotoJS_Photoover 5 years ago
Great!

Just to echo what others have said, I'd love to read more. At least one more chapter, please? She seems to be submissive; maybe some playful (or serious) BDSM.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5 Stars!

With so much poor work out there right now, I am relieved to discover this nice tale which carries a believable quality to it. Everything contained in this story is something that could easily happen in real life, and I find I prefer believable to excessive fantasy.

The one aspect some might question is the eagerness Jennifer displays. I happen to have a female relative much older than Jennifer who is open about her desire for sexual gratification. It can definitely happen as the story portrays.

I'm a tough grader, and don't give out 5 stars often. You earned it with this tale. I wish I could live it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More

I would love to see part 2 continuing into BDSM.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
They are all right

We need a second chapter and keep it anal

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
That story got me.

We totally need more of Jennifer anal adventures.

WargamerWargamerover 4 years ago
Top story

The lead up story was sooo good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I have a Jennifer too

except she's younger than me

still loves having me worship her ass tho' :)

MaxGirth69MaxGirth69about 4 years ago
So hot

I wanted to fuck Jennifer’s ass the way you described it’s gloriousness

roveroneroveroneover 3 years ago

SO hot...older,and appreciates/luvs rump rogering...lucky lucky Nathan.

Completely forgot about the other Jennifer White, who's certainly no stranger to rectal roots.

5 and fave....

RegretsRegretsover 3 years ago
American Warships

Hamster says that there were no WW2 warships around 30 years ago, and yet the Aircraft Carrier, Mississippi, shelled positions in Iraq with one shell, which apparently got the message across. “The first time her guns had been fired in anger since the Second World War.” That was in 2002.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
A Real Booty Bandit****

That was a hot piece of rectum ramming. Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A truly awesome anal story that wasn't weakened by a poor plotline,.. I just loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It was a great story. I loved every page.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm hard just thinking about the way the story built up. Loved it!

I wish my wife was into anal.

DanDraperDanDraperalmost 2 years ago

Damn good story. 5-stars.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[12.09.22]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story; there are lot of girl friends mothers who find their daughter boy friends attractive, my wife mother made a deal with me, and it was anal only, because my wife didn’t like it❕And she told her mother our issues with it, and her mother really surprised me with the offer, and it went on for about five years❕She had a long talk with her daughter about giving me that part of her as a special treat❕Her mother told me to take it slow, and promise her you won’t hurt her, and it’s working out well now❕My mother in law, and I get together for little anal quickly when we see the opportunity❕

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good premise.

Decent back story.

But not nearly enough sex.

Needed much more in the way for preliminaries/foreplay. Needed more teasing with orgasms being denied.

Needed much more attention paid to her asshole.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The MC needs to buy a really good strap-on so he can bang her pussy and her ass at the same time. I think Jennifer would melt if he did that.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Lovely story. I'm 37 years old guy in Kenya would love too hook up for such adventurous moments. +254710811266 Holla

rbloch66rbloch66about 2 months ago

Good story. There’s so many ways it could have continued. Was kinda hoping the daughter would come for a visit and catch them.

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May 16, 2022: Hey. Sorry, folks, I have not written anything new in quite a while now. I've obviously got a lot of series in progress, languishing, and I have another dozen stories in various states of completion. I am an amateur, part-time author, and never expected to spe...