All Comments on 'Jacksie & Jess'

The hockey wives’ retribution at the end was ridiculous. They basically raped Jess, is that what you’re saying? Nah, dude.

Counterpoint:

Hey, hey, hey, hey

If you want to be happy for the rest of your life

Never make a pretty woman your wife

So for my personal point of view

Get an ugly girl to marry you

If you want to be happy for the rest of your life

Never make a pretty woman your wife

So for my personal point of view

Get an ugly girl to marry you

A pretty woman makes her husband look small

And very often causes his downfall

As soon as he married her and then she starts

To do the things that will break his heart

But if you make an ugly woman your wife

Ah you'll be happy for the rest of your life

An ugly woman cooks meals on time

She'll always give you peace of mind

If you want to be happy for the rest of your life

Never make a pretty woman your wife

So for my personal point of view

Get an ugly girl to marry you

Don't let your friends say you have no taste

Go ahead and marry anyway

Though her face is ugly, her eyes don't match

Take it from me, she's a better catch

If you want to be happy for the rest of your life

Never make a pretty woman your wife

So for my personal point of view

Get an ugly girl to marry you

Say man! Hey baby!

I saw your wife the other day!

Yeah? Yeah, an' she's ugly!

Yeah, she's ugly, but she sure can cook, baby!

Yeah, alright!

If you want to be happy for the rest of your life

Never make a pretty woman your wife

So for my personal point of view

Get an ugly girl to marry you

- Jimmy Soul

Songwriters: Carmela T. Guida / Frank Joseph Guida / Joseph F. Royster

A good story but I never felt a connection with her so I never had a gut wrenching experience when she decided to cheat. Just a bitch with no morals.

5 stars anyway.

Bill S.

Thought the ending was rushed otherwise a pretty good story.

5 stars, but not a fan of the ex-wife's "girls' weekend away". Rape is bad, whoever it is, and that's what you make it sound like. Good story, but you should find an editor. Keep writing.

Maybe that's how you do things in CO, but here in CA we post-game in the parking lot (and the locker room), and take turns bringing the beer. But you got the eau-de-hockey-bag just about right, even though most of us spray our gear with Lysol after every game. Otherwise, I loved how you presented the hockey theme.

I never do this, but this story was so well done that I felt I should write what I was feeling. I felt I knew the character I felt I knew what he felt, there is more but that is enough. Is that not what a author is trying to do? Well done, do more!!

That was very very enoyable. LIked all the characters, even Jess and her flaws.

you did a good job with this.

"I swear Thomas, I have no interest in him, it was an idiotic fling on my part. I have no excuse, but you can't throw our marriage away over this. We are meant to be together!"

"The fact it means nothing makes your betrayal more disrespectful and frankly, sad. I'm not throwing our marriage away over this, you are... and over something that you claim was meaningless. Do you understand how pathetic that makes you? I'm merely retaining my last shred of dignity by letting go of you.

What you did was selfish and ignorant and I don't know how you'll ever find happiness... thankfully that's no longer my problem.

You may be beautiful, but like my grandfather said, you are ugly to the bone. Good bye Jess."

Such an excellent writer. Very few errors, great characterizations and plot development, and great stories!

Stick to either first person or third person author. Going from "Jess was planning" and abruptly switching to "I was sitting at the table when she came in" is awful. Get an editor.

Another great story, you write well, I am a BTB bloke so I like those stories of yours but I also enjoy your stories that end in reconciliation because you make them believable, well done⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️