All Comments on 'Jackson Kez - Space Diplomat Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
one arm

Kinda seems like you keep forgetting Jackson only has one arm now.

MrCharonSrMrCharonSrover 3 years ago

This story is fascinating to watch unfold. Just when I am comfortable the characters show new sides and the tale takes a new twist. Please find a way to restore Jacksons missing appendage.

You are doing a great job.

WhiteNekoWhiteNekoover 3 years ago

This was a lovely chapter, but how did Jackson adapt to swimming with only one arm? The sex scene works well, but the rest of his actions made it seem like he has two arms.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Sidestroke needs just one arm... ; )

Looking forward to the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love your work, I really hope it continues. You have some serious talent and a great imagination, please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Fascinating reading,when are we going to see chapter7 and more.

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Just a guy trying to write about a better tomorrow, where we all have more love, more sex, and more hope. Follow me on twitter for updates, WIP tidbits, and general thoughts on writing: https://twitter.com/BetterFuture_SF Jackson Kez Status: Chapter 5 submitted! Working on C...

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