All Comments on 'Jacob's Holiday - A Mother’s Lust'

Great story! Im hoping from some pregnancy ,mom needs it as she has been so neglected from her husband!

Sharing your mom? Thats fucked up

loved the first part but not the joining in with the other coupple

Let’s read Emma’s thoughts

More pretty please

That was a beautiful sexy story. I hope there us a sequel. I will be looking for it.

This was a great story. I came twice reading it. It's so natural to want to fuck your mom.

The guys should have sucked each other while the girls were at it. Girls pussy to mouth and guys dick to mouth. Make it completely fucked up.

Good Story but the addition of a second mother-son coupling detracted from the original storyline. I was enjoying it up until the time the Dutch got there.

Loved it! Especially the part where they introduced the dutch mom and son to the same taboo. Since i'm dutch it gave me something extra.

Good story although a bit OTT.

Teaching the other couple was cool but incredulous that Thea made out with the other mother while Jacob shagged her in front of Thomas.

Fantastic story. Please write more

Good story. Several small word errors.

"A sequel is in the works!"

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story before opening it ALWAYS earns an automatic rating of 1.

I love a hairy pussy and was so glad that Thea wasn't shaved. I would have thought after their first fuck, Thea and Jacob would be fucking like rabbits for the remainder of their vacation. Since they really didn't, I thought the story got off track with the Dutch mother and son. Since they're back home, will Jacob fuck Emma? Are Jacob and his mum really done? Since Lucas is gone so much, will Thea be able to resist fucking Jacob's big cock again? So close to 4, but I gave you 5 stars because the sequel has so much potential.

I don't see how mother and son can stay away from each other and I would love to read about it. I think Emma get's into the action. 5 Stars.

At first, it started as if the story was about fashion more than anything else, but the sex part came, and it became obvious that you put a lot more effort on the way the caracters were dressed than in the sex acts themselves, maybe for lack of the proper words, or you just got lost in lust and tryed to write too fast without noticing it and missed a lot in the way to paradise. But the effort is noted. The second couple kind of ruined the story, that was unnecessary.

great story, part 2 with sister?

Ridiculous and delusional, but most poorly written/ no story line worth reading usually goes that way. The chronic masterbaters always write many characters in so they don't have to develop the only ones needed to build a story worth reading over and over again without getting sick to their stomach.

Fantastic story. Thanks for sharing.

Very poorly written

Not bad - not great, but worth reading to the end. Maybe a little too much packed into one short adventure. Aside from the grammatical errors and missing words (editing required) we all make those, I have a pet complaint with MANY amateur writers. We don't invite someone "to have dinner with Jacob and I." We invite someone to dinner with Jacob and ME! Remember that "I" is the SUBJECT of a sentence and "ME" is the object. End of English Lesson.

Great story! Keep going!

it started okay-ish then went down the pipe.. 1/5

I ain’t like Jacob

Piss inn the nasayers. Good fun story. Try editing better for the sequel. Five stars just to cancel the one star.

Ship wreak stories

Loved it their sex was wild and yet loving great job!!! Waiting on the sequel and Jacob fucking his sister and mother again 5 big stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

While the story itself was good I did find some trends and patterns that can be improved on.

1. Writing mistakes: nothing grammatically but just mistakes that would happen to anyone normally writing up content.

2. Jumps: The attention to environment and physical details are great but the emotional aspects of the characters are fast forwarded. There were some scenes where I couldn't keep up with what was happening and had to read the previous paragraph and even then it felt really rushed. I suggest you put into writing the intimacy and emotions involved as that is the main selling point of stories like these.

Looking forward to the Mother/Daughter/Son combo!

I Love to see next part of the story