All Comments on 'Jacqueline'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
So many openings...

Loved you story! I could just picture the feeling seeing your colleague in such a place. No idea how I would have reacted. This little story gives a great "opening" for so many follow-up stories, in various combinations, complications, jealousies, suspense, etc -- and I used "opening" on purpose, given the obvious tangents towards for hetero, homo, and bi sex scenes. The he considered chosing the "boyish" Asian lady made all of this even more realistic. Please consider a sequel. Plus, I liked the perspective of an "observing by-stander" in this threesome and his "admission" of not being the sexually dominant one in this relation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not yet really out, but...

This is kind of cool, with a surprising twist -- a perfectly heterosexual gay story; pretty neat!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Amatory ambiguity

I fully agree with the previous comment. Both men, while closeted and constrained by their professional/family situations, accept (at least mentally) their bisexual side. I also think this is done in a clever (and rather unusual) way...

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