All Comments on 'Jacqueline Gets a Job'

.. what a pity about the silly spelling mistakes.

Who cares about the "silly spelling mistakes", loved the ending. Can't wait for more adventures of Jacqueline.

What a sexy story.

and for the most part, well-written. Must read more... Thank you.

Story was worth reading.... especially the ending. Good for her!

What a nice story and for a change the woman took control at the end. Loved the dialogue with wife on phone, the fucking and nipple play was good, and the ending sublime. Keep checking the want ads, Jacqueline needs another interview, smile.

How does this not have an "H" tag on it? Well set-up, well-written, hot/sexy as all get-out, and a great little O Henry ending of sorts! Can't imagine anyone reading this and not giving it a 5.

Yes, there were a few "silly" spelling mistakes, but as someone else said, who cares? The only one that's really significant is where you meant "shuddered" and had "shuttered."

You captured both of the personalities perfectly, and threw in the horny feelings perfectly. Great story.

When you check an article do NOT use Spellcheck!

It corrects SPELLING but does Not know if a word is being used in an incorrect context!

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