All Comments on 'Jade's 'To Go' Request'

Eh, I usually love monogamous romance stories, but this felt a little rushed. I mean by the second page, she was already ready to give up her anal cherry.

I would have loved to see the initial courtship and seduction played out a bit more. I mean the first date was 3 sentences long!

I rated this a 4.25, and since Literotica does not allow half point ratings, AND, since I always feel guilty about shortchanging people who take the time and effort to publish a story, I rated it a 5.

Anyway, hoping to read more of your works.

Where was the romance? Other than a few physical characteristics, there is no description of the personalities of these two people. What drew them together? What made them each unique and special? What strengths did they have? What insecurities? And hesitating over anal doesn't count. They talked, but what about?

Good story but seemed rushed at the last. 5 stars