All Comments on 'Jael's Promise Ch. 01'

Such a sweet seductive story. I loved it RC. buttafly

This is damn good :-)

Can I ask for something "normal", in *italic, bold, normal* type next time? It was distracting.

Otherwise this is great, and worth a 5.

Smiles...

Nathan

very nice RC I look forward to reading the next chapter SLM

I always love how your prose evoke such deep images. I don't with to sound overly effusive, but I enjoyed this a great deal, and look forward to future installments.

~ Tyr ~

This is an excellent first chapter. Beautifully descriptive and evocative; the narrative delivers superbly, maintaining a brisk pace and constantly whetting the appetite for more throughout. The ending is such a painful tease. I loved it.

-J-

well written. do not hesitate to continue this story.