All Comments on 'Jail Bait'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Close very close.

You had me in your corner all the way to the fairy tale ending. Next time keep it more real and just suger coat it a small bit. None the less keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good story.

I enjoyed reading this story. It is a very good story & you should keep writing more stories like this one.

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