All Comments on 'Jake: Finding True Love'

That was a great story...

Now this is really a prime example of a "Romantic Novella" and, as such, is well above the usual fare dished out on Literotica! Having spent over 40 years living and working in the Middle East, I find your description of the difficult life of Ujhi and her 'sisters' to be accurate and distressing. Some points of confusion – your initial time frame puts Jane as 13 years old and Jake as 10 years old!!! - also his summary of the two other women in his life over the past twelve years (Jen and Ujhi), rather negates his years in Missouri, filled with work and several short term liaisons that were sexually fulfilling! However, having said that, I must thank you for a most enjoyable and rewarding read. Keep up the good work. Pete.

Loved the story keep it up

Romance and sex: A GREAT combination.

I liked it. The slow history of his life and his final realization that his true love has always been on his own doorstep. I think in his mind he knew why he was going home.

Really touching and good rendering of events that I am familiar with. Well written, edited and great personal asides. Give us more!