All Comments on 'Jane Goes to Scotland'

Normally I enjoy a few days build up before the fucking happens.....but omg! this was def a hot quicky!

"like a pornographic Halfords ad"

Ok, I stopped at this point, gave you a 5, and left this comment.

Too fucking funny.

Nice details make it come alive for me.

I think I know that garage and must call for some French tongue! More please that was great

I've just read this one again. Dayum, girl, you is smokin' hot!

Where were you when I went to Fort William?

And why on earth aren't you still writing?

Thanks!

"brief ecstasy supplanted by the mundane once again" I hope this wise-cracking Jane eventually finds someone who not only briefly rocks her world, but joins with her on a plateau of compassion and sensuality. I love that Jane is young, smart, passionate, and searching.