Janet's New Job Ch. 02

The only good thing in this nasty mess is Rueben's beating and death.

To a very nasty story. Funny though, you don't usually kill off the black guy.

i take it rico is the one that got a hold of ruben. the rest were either closing the bar or getting a blowjob.

would have been nice if this had been a bit longer though.

i do find it funny to read some of the comments. i mean really. some of these morons make rude comments about the writers, and you can tell a lot of them don't even read the stories. just there to throw insults about their own insecurities.

i thank you for your time and for the story.

Yeah this was pretty much garbage from the get go.

It really takes 4 navy seals to beat one douchebag?

And why just him?

Stupid shite. Author must be a closet cuck wantobe or something... can't figure out how real men act, so goes all psycho and shite.

As for alimony, she will get it. She had no job when he filed. He got her fired. So 30% of this rich guy, the house, and probably some damn good alimony... boy he sure showed her!!

Fucking idiot.

not weakness no mercy, women are a dime a dozen, but a decent woman is a fucking miracle to be hold, sadly they are becoming just legends..look at the next group of whores coming up, drugs,sex,porn,divorces,violence all going up an up, but yet men still become soldiers, cops, firemen....i ask does that not prove what the weaker(moral character) sex is.....men never say they dont need women..men never say they can work and raise a family they dont need a woman,men dont cheat in their home,work..friends/family..food..entertainment/hobbies..and a loving companion, that is all most decent men crave...women want it all, but they want it great and if they get board..off they go big D...thats why men only want a good wife but women demand a great man..great men still exists in great numbers..see any wall to the fallen, but a good woman is a fucking miracle see the divorce rate and who files it.

The story was well written but didn't make any sense. It seemed to build up Janet as a symbolic HOT WIFE, when all she was is a skank and her husband a wimp. A real man would've got her close and shredded them and called the casino to tender her resignation. If Janet protested the marriage would've terminated. All this drama was implausible and wildly inflated due to a skank and a wimp. When the conversation was overhead that Janet had with Reuben about the back room meeting her husband should've confronted Janet right there and then. This story had a hidden agenda that promoted a cuckold and hot wife lifestyle to make any degree of sense otherwise it was not very rational to me at least. It could've been more enjoyable if the author were more forthcoming if that were his intentions. In that case the husband would've been more happy about the situation his wife had put herself in.

The whore got off too easy though. She should have gotten nothing in the end. Oh well, I'm sure she'll fuck her way back.

HA HA HA

new ideas to perform. TK U MLJ LV NV

Married 30 years means she is 50 years old. No one would hire old women for her job. If they did, they would not have any customers. Nor would anyone pay to fuck a 50 year old woman. They hire and men pay to fuck 18 to 24 year old women. There is no demand for women over their mid 20s.

"A warning to anyone that thinks they can handle the swinging lifestyle. Beware of unforeseen pitfalls along the way, that will surely lead you to a divorce."

Indeed

"I wanted to like it but there was something that killed it for me......

Ok, look at it this way.

Men have already figured this out years ago, women get to chose what we we do and when we do it. Otherwise its rape. If a woman says "We can have sex, but its only "this" way" guess what, if you want to have sex with her its "that way" and "that way only".

Unless you're the worlds best salesman that's it, unless you can get her to chance her mind. "She's" the one in control sorry to say.

There are very a few men who can make women do what "they" want, but they have to be exceptionally handsome to pull this off. Women on the other hand can be passable at best and still command a premium.

Where am I going with this? Glad you asked.

Using that as a basis what did you have in the story. The wife is giving it up to random men by the time he catches her. She's giving up anal and I don't know if he's never gotten it or its be a very long time since he had.

But she's in command of her destiny.

So who do they kill? The man she's working for who she gets to line up dates for her. Not the wife, not the guys who's doing his wife, but this guy.

Why him? "He's" the one who is more deserving of death? Not her, you know, the one "actually" cheating on her husband?

That's my beef, if you're going to kill people get "ALL" the players don't leave the most guilty to walk and pick the low guy on the ladder.

That's like a villain an a movie going "You know what the price of screwing me over is?" then he turns and shoots some random stranger to make his point.

To me the story was hurt by the murder. And most certainly by the fact that you just let the main character say to the wife at the end "Well you hurt me and not having me any more in your life is your punishment" for actually cheating on him and trying to bring him an STD, but the other the guy she used to get her customers gets a free trip the morgue?

She could have ended his life by choice. The other guy didn't make her do this, but what you wrote in the story, it was all on her. But he gets to die?

Why wasn't his punishment also not getting to be around the husband any more either?"

-Risq

but you do not make that tie for readers. What I do not understand is that Janet starts whoring around on Day 1 of her job knowing that her husband was going to check up on her? I also do not understand the murder of Reuben by the husband's military buddy. Paul and Janet were told about her job as a sex object for high rollers before Eeuben and Ray. Then we have the whispered conversation between Jenny and Janet (see previous story). Reuben then acts as Janet's pimp getting his commission in ass. So Janet can whore herself out without remorse and her only consequence was a divorce. Meanwhile Reuben gets a death sentence? The other problem with the story was that Paul had no problem sharing his wife with other men (see previous stories) so he feel betrayed because Janet earned her $1500 per week in tips? What did he think she would be doing for that amount of money? Lastly, given that he was partly responsbile for this situation just dumping your wife of 31 years seem callous and you wonder if he ever loved her. I do nt beleive that a long marriage entitles you to ignore cheating but they had built a life and rasied a daughter together. Anyway, I would liek to see other Paul and Janet stories.

Really enjoyed the story.

Hackneyed plot, so even if the English would have been improved by editing, this is still pretty bad.

Enjoyable to read and even though he was leaving her it was a sad ending for him to lose 30 years of marriage.

Thanks for the read