All Comments on 'Janie's Card'

Good story!

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Sweet little story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Nicely done. Thank you

Well done!

Wow! just wow! Such an awesome little vignette

Wonderful story - Thank you for the uplift !

5*

Having just read a Loving Wife story prior to reading this story, I forgot I was reading in the romance category. So, I was expecting a "going on a date as a one time thing", the ending grabbed me. Thanks. Need more love stories like this.

Ha Ha Ha.

What happened to goodshoes2 it did happen to me too.

I was expectng the fall out.

Glad it never came :-)

A really sweet TRUE LOVE story. As they are young I expect that they will beat my 46 years of marrige but I'm only 80 so they have to work at it ;-)

Keep up yhe beautiful work. Thanks!

He's a fucking idiot. Luckily, his wife is a hell of a lot smarter than he is.

Awesome ending to a really scary version of the card.

Excellent story! For a while I thought that this was going to turn into a cuck story, based on that "Hall Pass" card. But, no, you saved the whole thing and made it into a happy ending. Well done. Oh, I agree, only an idiot would give out a Hall Pass as a way of enticing a relationship. That then becomes the premise of a cheating wife, with "permission" story years later. Cheers.

Very, very nice. Thanks for this! 5/5

"You are really lucky to have me. God only knows what a mess you would make of everything if I weren't around."

Sounds like the girl I married, half a century ago.

5 stars is just a beginning.

Great surprise ending! Nicely told. 5 stars

Got me! 5*

Good story. I did the same thing early on in our now 39 year marriage. I highly recommend it. Takes all the pressure off. I don't think she ever used it, but if she did? I meant it........

You saved the story at the end.

Excellent epilogue. Good story.

5* That's very sweet. Thank you.

An almost cuck tale, given the monkey behaviour of the husband. Disliked it.

Only an unbelievable sheep guy would ever give such permission to her wife.

Much, much better. I'd delete that first attempt, as it suffered from TXTT's original faults. This stepped away and came back with a different and much better character arc.

All right. We be anonymous here. It made me cry. Thanks dear authoress. (No dude could write this.)

A sweet story

Great heart warming story on a tag where misery is an everyday breakfast and cheating is a seven course dinner served regularly by a 4 star chef.

Bravo!

A lovely, loving story.

Best "Hall Pass" story ever! Deserving of more than 5 stars.

Wow, an actual loving "loving wife". That's such a rarity. Really great use of the cliche, thank you for the excellent work!

Beautiful AND smart. Noice. "I would rather die than betray you." This is the sentiment more spouses need to take to heart and embrace fully. That's not to say if you're unhappy you shouldn't discuss the matter, even if means a divorce. But don't go behind your partner's back and betray them; be better than that!