by o_girl
I just have one complain, please post it in a bite size chunk and I dont like to get wasted like my 21st birthday, I would rather prefer to sip it like a vintage deserves.
I loved 36 which is why I looked at your other stories. This is just abuse wrapped up as bdsm. The classic how to reduce a loving wife with submissive tendencies to a brainless controlled piece of meat.
Zilch respect for either males...
You will not get a safe word until you have earned it !!! ...WTF !!
I don’t want to be beaten senseless and she promptly is.
Left alone in bondage and gagged.
Sorry sir but this missed by a mile which is a shame as you write really well.
I love the perspective of the new submissive exploring total submission in the real as well as BDSM world, you have a wonderfull feel for the emotions and discoveries the flow of the story is great. Keep up the good work, I look foward to more...
It’s a wonderful written story. I hope to read more from you in the future.
I love this story. Please write Part 2. It must be exiting to read her further developments. I hope you planning to do this
An excellent story telling. You should write a secound part. Are you planning this? Thank you for your work.
I love this story. Very well written. Are you planning to write part 2? I would love to read it.