All Comments on 'Janis Takes a Break'

gotta pick one name and stick with it.

If you've read any of my other stories, you'll see several different characters. Nat is Natalie, which is to say that she is NOT Nicki. Making them the same would be nonsensical.

This is further made clear by the sentence...

Nicki frequently masturbated with her ear to Nat's wall as Nat was brought to orgasm by both sexes.

They're two different girls.

Take your time. Read. Enjoy.

I thought the story was well written and didn't have trouble keeping track of the characters, as a previous comment suggests someone did. However, my grammatical pet peeve was frequent in this story, so I couldn't give it a 5. Janis is only one person (hence, singular), so even though her name ends in "s" she still gets the possessive "s" after the apostrophe. In other words, it should be Janis's boyfriend, etc. The rule about dropping the s is only when the s makes the word plural. Ok, enough with the grammar lesson. Thanks for the hot story. Keep writing!

To the anon writer. Who gives a flying fuck about the grammer. You poor fuck. Get a life. Great story.

This series about these college girls is fucking awesome. Super hot! ;-)