All Comments on 'Jan's Chicago Business Trip Pt. 03'

Blah blah blah.

Another sex story written by a guy who’s never had sex.

And never will.

You make stupid look good. The opening line of, "I'd been serviced for hours" told me you're an idiot. Not even whores fuck for hours on end without respite, oh, and banging against the cervix, as a female let me tell you it hurts like hell. But then, stupid people like you never consider such reality. Nope, you simply type away convinced that your story will be the one to rock everyone's boat. Newsflash, it hasn't and won't. I couldn't wait to score this slop a 1* even though I only skimmed through most of it.

She should show Michael the baby bump jason gave her.

Loved it, every single word. best line in the story? "Fuck this cunt like you stole it" !! 5 Stars*

Hot stuff. I sure hope you keep going with this! I am an IR cuck. I wish we could afford a hotel room. We live in the sticks. The kids are too little to understand what goes on now. I don’t know what we’re gonna do in a few years. I sure hope Jason knocks her up. It’s what I wish for, too. (Well, I can dream, can’t I? Lol)

Very hot and very well written. The whole series deserves the five stars I gave it.