All Comments on 'Janus Coins: John's Story - Ch. 03'

You do an excellent narrator's voice. The observations, the digressions - the fact that he never found out what happened to Chip and Rachel... wonderful.

It's been nearly half a century since I've been in an intensive college scene like this (at U. of Wis, Madison) but this story brought it all back. Thank you for that.

The setup was good, the lead-in to the meeting of the (current) protagonists also, and the segue to the sexual activity great--but perhaps that's because I'm married to a coppertop whose appetites still mirror those of Shannon. I suppose (like most who read these stories) I am vicariously imagining myself as John--the focus of a breathtakingly beautiful and assertive redhead whose lust for the irresistible me is...irresistible.

Kudos for writing well, and getting me there.

But now I've gotta go back and find Chapters One and Two to find out just what the hell the "Janus Coin" is...although it seems not to have played much of a part in this story. Loved it. Thanks again. More please.

Good chapter. I'm partial to readheads over southeast Asians.

Looking forward to more If I'm Honest chapters.

Another really good chapter. I'm impressed. You have your own voice, you give each character a distinctive personality, and the detail is wonderful.

The " coin " is a good premise . Even the a little too familiar with the ritual the girls display is a way to move it faster . But takes a little of the coins mystery away . But this is about the erotica Right ? To hell with the mystique .

GR8 job . Fine ass girls . And I can't wait to hear about Teresa . Nothing hotter than a hot Asian . ( except an elf ) lol .

Wonder if you pick one of these 2 ? Or is this just the 2nd pair of 10 ?

I’m enjoying everything of yours that I’ve read so far. Thank you

Shannon wins coming off the line.

Sure appreciate the variety of your work

Waiting hopefully for the next chapter, as it's been over 6 months since this one came out. Just one nitpick, and that's about the name "Janus Coins". Plural means more than one, and so far John's only gotten one coin. Unless there's going to be more stories about more people with more coins...

Lovely chapter, and I adore redheads! I also like the premise that the girls compete but in a friendly way and all is good. Keep it up!

You know, even if they don’t turn out to be the life mate he wants, he definitely going to have a great time of his life.