All Comments on 'Jasmine's Discovery Ch. 01'

Can't wait for chapter 2. Keep up the good writing.

A good start, a little quick to start with, there was no build up and they just jumped into bed after they ate dinner, I guess good thing for wine, also not into being blindfolded either, but hey that is just my opinion, when ch 2 comes out can you consider building it up a little more

You write beautifully. The prose is so descriptive & evocative that I can almost feel it. Great work.