All Comments on 'Jason and Dayce Ch. 01'

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avidreadravidreadralmost 12 years ago
Potential

Interesting beginning. My only real quibble is Jason never saying anything to Dayce about being bi. His friend told him he was gay, but he never reciprocated and never even tried to hint about something more developing? Not wanting to jeopardize the frienship is weak, in my opinion. There's plenty of ways it could have been brought up and even substantiated or laughed off as a joke. Oh well. Otherwise, the story is entertaining and I look forward to see what's going on with that plant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great start

Great start, can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Can't wait to see what happens next.

beneebeneealmost 12 years ago

hopefully we would not have to wait long for chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Having a gay friend would be the A#1 opening for telling him you're bi. But for all of that, it's an interesting story. Can't wait to find out what's in the plant.

Weregurl93Weregurl93almost 12 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

So can't wait to read more. Update soon please.

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

IS THAT IT.? WHERE IS THE REST OF IT.?

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
You stopped!!

How could you just when it was getting interesting lol hurry can't wait to read what happens next

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Intriguing

Will be interested to see where it goes

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