All Comments on 'Jason and Dayce Ch. 02'

hot but too short. I like that you threw in bdsm and the magic aspect. I'd like to know more about the magic. Some mention of how that exists in the world and in his family. Does he have any abilities? Why not approach him in real life? Looking forward to that. We know Dayce hasn't been in a relationship (with anyone?) b/c of how he felt for Jason. What is Jason's dating/relationship history? I know he never let Dayce see the bi side of him, but has he explored that? Has he had lots of relationshipsk with women? I'd think he must have had relationsips or Dayce would have wondered why not

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Not sure what to think. Dayce and Jason do intrigue me; the magic element interests me, but not the BDSM. I do wonder why neither of them said anything to the other. That kind of tiptoeing always annoys in, whether it be in stories, books or movies. I will look forward to more to see where the story is headed.

Since you seem to be developing what Jason will be doing to Dayce I think this story should be categorized "BDSM" which I absolutely hate! I thought this would be a romantic love story but BDSM - no way!

Very curious how they will progress.

it is ok

im cool with bedroom control and even like it a little except i just cant get into pain, but outright controlling another person is wrong, although its obvious to me that the character just wants to love and care for Dayce.

Pain and pleasure belong together keep writing I like it.

love it keep writing

Please write more. Even though I'm personally not into BDSM this story so far is interesting and I would like to read more.

wish to god!!u would keep writing

You have to going. This story has a lot of potential.

please come back and add more