All Comments on 'Jassie and Her Daddy Ch. 02'

Jassie and her daddy are incredible lovers. I wish my daddy had loved me like that.

If only you used spellcheck .....the story was great ,well thought out , I actually felt like a participant .More please and don't forget he must get around to licking her beautiful ass .

You need to continue with this story. Hopefully leading to it's inevitable conclusion, Jassie with a swelling belly.

This short stroker was intense and also a bit sentimental. The Daddy/daughter element was very sexy in a loving way, and I must give this one a 5 as well. I highly recommend this one.

That was decidedly too good for words. Please keep up the writing.

It isn't often people write about a loving yet highly exciting sexual encounter. I would love to read what happens next though, I see it has been a few years since you have written. Anyway it was one of the best stories I have read without the cliché of adding the friend or mother. :)

I came all my hand and tighs and key board. This is so good, so loving and so lustful. I want more, please write more like this it makes me cum so hard!!!

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Did you use enough of those?

If you check for errors.... and this one has dozens.... your work will be more enjoyable for your readers. Try writing with both hands on the keyboard instead of with one in your shorts.