All Comments on 'Jayhawk Girl Alone in the Big City'

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Northpacific2017Northpacific2017over 6 years ago
Short but possibilities

Interesting , More?

NorthPacific

AxelottoAxelottoover 6 years ago
I love it when a plan comes together

And salute her determination to escape.

Big silver rings not a turn-on, but that's just because i like the look of smaller ones.

justgraciesdadjustgraciesdadover 6 years ago
Fantasy Do Come True?

Wild wonderful story. Loved the way you captured the moment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Talent

Real talent as a writer with vivid imagination that somehow makes it all realistic. And i think this is the first time i have seen concatenation used in a Literortica story...

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