All Comments on 'Jayne and Her Neighbor'

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CliterateDykeCliterateDykeover 7 years ago

For a first story thid was quite lovely. Good character development & well written narrative. Looking forward to more from your sexy literate self.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Very nice. Short and hot.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
not bad

for a short story it was pretty good, hopefully the Neighbor needs her phone charged again

nolinnolinover 7 years ago

i would love a part 2!

CassieKCassieKover 7 years ago
I'm ready to be "re-charged".

What a sexy sweet story.🌹

Loved the story line, hope you continue to write more chapters.

As a first effort, it was sweet, sexy and definitely worth 5 stars for effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
True story?

Or was it a tale of fantasy?

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Very nice story!

Quite erotic, please continue this story!

BigspurtBigspurtover 5 years ago
Nice Surprise

It’s too bad that surprises like this don’t happen more often.

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