All Comments on 'Jay's Loelife Ch. 14'

by Mrsgnomie

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved this chapter. The way Aidan loved Loren rather than Jay. So good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just gets better. Jay is the best guy ever

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029almost 2 years ago

Sighs. I can so empathize with Loren: I'd rather cut my arm than hurt a kid but I also never felt the need to reproduce. I'm his female twin really.

carmelcookeecarmelcookeealmost 2 years ago

This was cute to read. When Adian leaves Loe is gonna feel it

sm1982sm1982almost 2 years ago

Aww poor Jay was always Team Aidan but the lil guy is Team Loe. Jay can’t catch a break lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

To the Author: Mrsgnomie, I would just like to appreciate your talent for writing stories by simply pointing out, that this particular chapter, on an Erotica site, has a rating of 4.85, despite having no sex scene.

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