All Comments on 'Jay's Loelife Ch. 32'

I really like this story, but the celibacy part feels a little awkward. I understand it’s kind of a comeback to when Jay wouldn’t have sex with Loren until they were a couple (and that time it was cute), but now it feels a little forced. That been said, the way the characters are taking the news does feel natural to them.

Keep up the good work, you’re almost done with this story!

I love these guys more every time I read a chapter

Excellent

The subtle changes in both men are slowly closing the gaps between them such that they are developing a very strong, healthy relationship and one that doesn’t feel like the other is giving up on values that are critically dear to him. Bravo. Keep this story going strong!

To Anonymous: "I really like this story, but the celibacy part feels a little awkward": a little awkward? That's the understatement of the year.

Anon 4 months ago,

Did you comment twice just to emphasize your hate train a bit more? How pathetic can a person be? What is an understatement is how much brain damage you got there to do this for a 33-chapter series instead of just leaving. Enjoy being an attention seeker that gets off from being labeled as an idiot, I guess.