All Comments on 'Jean's Path to Self Discovery Ch. 01'

by Tetriana

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SeductionLoverSeductionLoverabout 14 years ago
Hot, Slow Pacing

What a great start to this story! And your writing style leaves time to appreciate the nuances of the interplay between the characters. Really look forward to Jean's further awakening.

uhctawuhctawabout 14 years ago
like it

Look's like a fine start to me can not wait for ch 2

keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
interesting

well written hope we will not wait long for ch2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hot

please please post ch2 this looks like it could be worth a read

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