by Egmont Grigor
it would have been a great story until you had that old coot banging his vets wife who is now pregnant and because its one of you stories and on this website, the baby most likely belongs to douglas. i just got done reading some of your stories and they all had cheating in them, wifes and husbands and they act like idiots. im srry, but your angela briscoe series were retarded. the only thing that comes to mind is you're okay with cheating or you always wanted to but never did. i know i sound like an asshole and for that im srry but you have these great, funny stories (most of which seem to be in the romance section) that go tits up when you bring in the cheating scenes and at that ruins the story.
Everything he or she said is exactly how I feel.
Lot of fun and laughs, thanks for sharing!
Others: obviously not meant to be taken seriously, just go with it!
Funny, but very sloppy. Hard to follow, when both Douglas and Jed are named Jed for almost a half page (for instance). Still funny, even though..