All Comments on 'Jed Goes Camping with His Sister Ch. 02'

Pretty formula, but very hot. Maybe a bit more detailed in the actions. But it’s your choice. Just keep them coming.

Tc

You did a masterful job of bringing Lizzy in to the story.

I want to reread about Jess' previous sexual adventures. Wasn't she a real slut?

What a wonderful sister!

Good sequel but little quick to jump into the sex with no discussion/thoughts about the implications. I let it pass on the first part, but needs to get addressed better moving forward. 4*

ready for ch. 3

It was good...right up until the last paragraph. Why couldn't you just leave it alone with the three of them? Why does somebody's mom always get drug into the equation? In the space of four sentences, you went from a rating of 5 to a 3. SMH [sigh]

Awesome story! That chapter was better than the first one. I hope they keep getting better. That sure does point in the right direction in the ending. 5 stars, more if I could. Thank you for a great story.

That was a great story needs another chapter where they tell Lizzie the truth and when they invite Charlotte

I'm good with another chapter but please just keep it the three of them.