All Comments on 'Jeffrey's Family Ch. 02'

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Bi47Bi47over 3 years ago

Excellent very very good.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💕💕💕😍😍

mxzermxzerover 3 years ago
nice

wow just read both of the stories very hot thanks. hope you continue them

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430over 3 years ago
My Comments

Hope there is more. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Why do you italicize proper names?

It's not needed -- the capitalization is all that's needed -- and all you are doing is making more work for yourself.

havenun2010havenun2010over 3 years ago

I think you are doing good

Slut4daddie36DSlut4daddie36Dover 3 years ago

Love it! I need a brother or two like you!!

Sexy_Bear1Sexy_Bear1over 3 years ago

I love this story and I can't wait for the last one.

Rooster60Rooster60about 2 years ago

Such a good entertaining erotic story, shame the next chapter still hasn't been posted

tralan69ertralan69er10 months ago

Can't be done,

Penetrating the cervix isn't likely or even possible with a penis. Anything is possible in fiction.

LegendInMyOwnMindLegendInMyOwnMind7 months ago

Waiting desperately for Chapter 3. You really leaned into the family incest theme. Well done.

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