All Comments on 'Jemma's Fantasy'

Just what Dan really needs - "Best Friends" who will stab him in the back, and a slut girlfriend. Nice. Why didn't you have her save some cum so she could feed the poor cuckold a creampie, too?

I like your descriptive power, too bad all the characters are bitches, bastards, or losers.

I want to be Jemma! Great story!

Perfect blend. Now the thing is, she needs to crave that threesome and want it again. This time, Dan catches her, but he finds he is turned on. Turns out he was just afraid he would lose her, and also thought he had to say no only because it was the "thing to do." But seeing his girlfriend in such bliss turns him on and so her threesomes will continue with him watching.

They would be nicer then those friends. Jemma is a worthless slut who will be anyone and everyone. There is nobody but Dan worth talking about here. Sexy girls are a dime a dozen, which makes Jemma a one cent whore.

Good character development, pacing, length. Believable. Likeable. Sure, she cheated. But I forgive her. Good build-up of sexual tension. Wish I could give iy six stars.

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kick her cheating ass to the curb and arrange for debilitating "accidents" for the bastards who'd do that to someone who considered them friends.

What a excellent story. I'm 56 now...a woman, and mother who enjoys erotic writing...and this was so perfect. I am married rather happily for 27 years now and no one in my life would ever suspect that I had a three-some with two of my husband's, then fiance's friends, one night while he was away at a seminar. Like Jemma I encountered them at a bar where I was with co-workers for a retirement party. I ended up a bit too tipsy and ended up as well at one of their apartments where I was roughly taught what two horny men could do to a girl. I too was dripping sperm and was treated to them pulling me into the shower and having them pee on me. That was more than interesting. They fucked me til I was sore for a week and all involved have kept their secrets.

This story was very good. Why not continue this lovely story? Dan learns the truth and is aroused by it. He watches a repeat performance by Jemma, Nick, and George. Inside, Dan has a malicious hatred building against all three of them. Jemma continues the threesomes. Meanwhile, Dan is seeking two men, to serve a dish of cold revenge; not hitmen, rather one man HIV positive, the other with both herpes and HIV positive. Dan pays the two new studs, to have a few threesomes with his cum craving Jemma. Jemma unknowingly becomes infected and in turn, she unknowingly infects Nick and George in future get together. Please incorporate plenty of oral, as herpes of the mouth and throat, must be pretty unsightly and uncomfortable. Dan has altogether stopped having sex, with Jemma, because he says that watching her perform, is enough for him; it actually is enough, however not for any fetish reasons, rather for self preservation! Dan, the loving boyfriend, and stand up good friend, witnesses the illnesses, downward slide, and death of his girlfriend, and two so called friends. Dan stays silent about what he has done, to infect the three of them, that is until each one is very ill, and close to death, then he reveals separately, to each of the three, how the hurt him, the hatred which they created in him, and how he has murdered them, for their betrayl! Each one is shocked, saddened, and as good as dead, as Dan tells each one, to burn in hell, and walks out on them. It seems that revenge is indeed, a dish, best served cold! Daniel

Great story, great writing. Thanks!