All Comments on 'Jen and her BFF's Brother'

Well written and enjoyable to read.......

Please, please proof read. He was called Matt or Mat several times

A sweet, sexy story about two very likable and considerate people finally exploring their feelings for each other. And a sassy, wise sister. For me, all parts of are well-developed and well-paced. Sometimes these sentimental (read: Hallmark Channel) stories skip too quickly over the sex. Not in this case. This is the first of yours I’ve read, PF, and I’m looking forward to more. 5 start, with thanks

Putting Jen in a green dress was on key! Red heads look so nice in green. Not going in to great detail, or using the words "cock" and "pussy" every few lines is great. It leaves us to use our imagination. I also enjoy how you put them talking a lot during their first time. Shows real emotions, the nervousness but yet comfortable around each other. How Jen took control was a great step forward for this character. How she went from a mess, to being in love. I also like the thought of these two coming together, after years of loving each other, but not really knowing it. One last thing. I have always felt that a person's first time should be sweet, and with someone they really care about. Not a wham bam thank you ma'am. Very nice touch.

Great story, love a sweet romantic tale.

Jen needs to learn her man's name already! 21 years and she still can't figure it out? My old lady calls me Matt, I'm gonna 'mack her hiney...watch her buns go 'jiggle, jiggle, jiggle'! "Teach YOU to call ME 'Matt'...the heck is wrong with you, woman! Gonna hafta get me a necklace with my name on it so you can remember who's layin' the wood to ya!" J/K 5/5