All Comments on 'Jen Meets Sporty Neighbours'

I loved the story, the sex was hot. The characterization got a little light, but no short story with 30+ characters is going to flesh them all out. I do like the romance building between Jennifer and James, with his full acceptance of her vibrant sexuality, perhaps leading to a long term Stag/Vixen relationship. Now to really do edisonCaroline proud, you have to do the next 5 episodes of this story! Please?

She wanted more and more, no real hesitation!

I super enjoyed your story, but I also wanted to call out how much I appreciate you including enthusiastic consent over and over. It's awesome that she's a willing participant without just being "used" and it really shows that verbal consent can be super hot. Thanks for that and great job - really sexy, yummy story!

I did not get into this one. When it went past James and Matt, possibly Jack, well, then it was too much. Could a woman's body really take such hard overuse, and yet enjoy it?

Also, I'm not enthusiastic about anal to begin with, so when more unrealism is piled on, in the form of a giant cock in her anus -- let alone the 2, and then 3(!) at the same time that followed -- it was just too over-the-top unrealistic to be enjoyed.

Indecent Proposal (an excellent story) had more than needed build up to the sexual relationship. This story suffered from lack of personal relationship, unbalanced to a far out, unrealistic sex scene. At least, the sex was respectful, in that it was not abusive or coercive.

Paul in Oklahoma

Not the least but erotic.