All Comments on 'Jenkins Trail Shelter Pt. 02'

Love it .Knoxville my home town,

Fantastic, what a story. Both parts had me in all the way. Please keep writing stories like this. A happy ending like yours just makes my eyes leak.

5 stars. Great story. Very touchy.

Very well written. Too bad that Lisa died but the second part made up for it. 5 stars.

Sweet!

Great story! 5 Stars.

That was one of the most neat stories I have ever read. Thanks

tear jerker, loved it

This was really a sweet story-sad Lisa died :-( However meeting daughter more than made up for it. Liked all the sexy parts too! Keep writing.....thankyou!

SUBERB!!!

Loved the chapter. Seemed like it was rushed on the second page. But still loved the story.

One of the best! Beautiful story, well written.

beautiful

Yes, really great. Would that we all got such a second chance.

While not a fan of father-daughter incest, well written story at every level. 5*

Too sad without Lisa,

for an old man,, it was heart warming

Great story. A little sad but makes the story all the better. Keep up the work!

Truly heart warming and even wholesome. Great work. Thanks for sharing this one.

Mr. Hippy/share with his employees will have to cut down on his generosity to his workers now that he has a couple of Children/grandchildren to support.

Much better ending than that of the first chapter! Nice save!

Excellent story

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep writing!